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Lycans Chp.1 Pg.5

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:iconcryforeverplz: ERMERGERD WURS OVUR DER?!

I know it's not as good as the rest of the pages, but behind the head view is really hard. XD But I'm getting better. I actually had drawn the second last panel in my script-book while I was in San Diego after Comic-Con! (I was leaving Disneyland and heading to Universal studios!)
I internally am proud of this, but I probably won't act like it. :) Most of the drawings turned out ok. (My Fav panel is the one where Yui speaks about the vampires.)

You want to know something really funny? When I first drew the first and second panel, the grass with blood on it looked like a pile of poop... The thought makes me internally die from laughter on the inside. :XD:

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Love Yui's cute face in the fourth panel. She looks so adorable. :heart:

You're indeed getting better drawing your wolves. I see the improvements in each of your submissions. :) The backside of Kori in the 8th panel doesn't look bad. I guess he has an ear forward and an ear back? That's 'bout what it looks like in my viewpoint.

:? In 7th panel, is Kori turning? If so, that's one thing you need to work on some more. I've noticed in one of your previous artworks when drawing a wolf turning as well...as they look like their bodies have gone extra long, basically stretching, to make their curve in their body. I believe their rear ends with their tail and hind legs need to be closer to their front legs (when they're turning I mean). Not by too much. It's to help keep their regular body length. =D I don't see dogs much anymore, so you would have better ideas how they would turn anyway. Feel free to correct me. I'm just suggesting trying to keep your wolves' original body lengths. If the wolves were already long, then keep them long, but if they were already shorter like how your Yui is already smaller than the others, then try keeping them short. 'Cuz I mean... when turning in that certain angle, wouldn't a small portion of their bodies be hidden when trying to turn to almost face what's behind them? If so, then that's why we get the small illusion they appear shorter when turning. I understand drawing animals or humans leaning or bending can be tricky. I tend to be out of proportion too sometimes. :giggle: Something we both are in practice with. :)

Overall with your penciled comic pages, you're doing well. :thumbsup: If only if you had a program that could help darken the pencil marks for easier reading and seeing all your details. :o The one crappy thing with scanners... :dead: they lighten images too much. Keep it up though, Darg! =D I'm with ya all the way! :tighthug: